What do you think of my story so far?

I like it! The only thing is, the word 'Danian' is totally jacked from Chaotic... Haha. A word of advice for you, in my opoinion, would be 'show, don't tell.'. You don't have to explain all about the Danians and Vessonauts.. It would be better to show it, as in it comes up in a conversation, or they pay a little visit to the main character's school.